A Dream Comments
Once I dreamed I awoke on a ship
In my own special room, as she swayed and dipped
I walk down the corridors, just like a queen
Touching and seeing the things in my dream
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Good job it wasn't the one about eating a marshmallow and not being able find the pillow! This actually has a lovely ethereal feel to it. You have captured an essence of the dreamstate.
Time to get off the ship, and pursue a boat of your own? Dreams seem to have a language all their own, if only we could learn it. Very good poem, and dream.
Glad you did not fall over board or get sea sick..... Nice dream and love the ending....... Jim Troy
A seafaring dream indeed funny what we dream at times..I dream P/H will work at my first click not so only a dream....nice one..regards
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7/31/2025 7:36:14 AM # 1.0.0
dreams can be alarming. nice write