Sunday, August 16, 2009

A Dream Comments

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Struggling hard for my crop to be on top
The taxi is waiting for me for my freight
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Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan
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Surya . 14 September 2009

a wonderful poem.nice composition.enjoyed reading. voted10 surya

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

wonderful poem, excellent written................10

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 18 August 2009

Nicely penned......excellent expression...........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2009

The dream I had in that nightmare reminds It was a premonition of the death to have come A lost, a death, and an agony we cannot forget A lost of a life, the meaning of the dream I had...it is so hard to forget the bad dreas easily/. so, etimes it is singla of danger comig to us and prove cistly to us. it is just intuniation or telpathy u call it... very nice....10 but dreams not come true dear... read mine.. all dreams not come true... pulled from bed..

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Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan

Jessie Clarete Bernabe Cadsawan

Angono, Rizal, Philippines
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