Monday, July 31, 2006

A Dreadful Day Comments

Rating: 3.3

Have you ever walked on a sea of sand?
And thought it broken glass?
Have you left your heart in a barren land?
And be haunted by the past?
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A.J. McKinley
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David Harris 11 March 2007

A.J. I can relate to everything that you said in this wonderful poem. In my eyes, just beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. David

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Lylyanna Pilewski 07 August 2006

that was really great I loved it one of those have you ever poems adn I'm not just sayin that cause you say it through out the poem it really it just one of those poems. kk loved it good job. Lylyanna

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Tom O'connor 05 August 2006

I've had some of those, nice poem ; -)

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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