A Dramatic Love Relation! ! ! Comments

wow what a scream of joy............great powerful ending with fabulous flow of words and fine rhymes.......10

ohhhhhh that was a strong ending..so beautifully and deeply written..a very true and beautiful definition for the love, , which is ful of pain andpleasure..loved an angry ocean it is and the hero who is able to dive and face and adapt it's waves...

well done and it says a lot in particular with the subject terrific and smooth - mel