Thursday, December 5, 2013

A Dragonfly Comments

Rating: 4.4

I was then, a boy of barely seven,
One day I was sauntering in my garden.
While I watched and touched the flowers,
Saw a dragonfly in the afternoon hours.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Dr. Ma Ali 10 October 2016

It’s a nice poem . I think you know dragonfly sometimes wants to be Spider man. I wish you could see this. It suit stretched very far and then add a tail and wings to the spree. It can also put the local spiders busy, spinning a great web in a very big tree. Unfortunately when it sit on it, it weighed a tad too much! Golly Ge! ! !

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Khairul Ahsan 02 November 2016

Thank you Dr. Ali, for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment here. Almost same or similar comment has appeared four times, due to some system malfunctioning. I am deleting the first three.

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

A beautiful poem, my friend. I love all aspects of nature and frequently study it in detail, marveling at the intricacies and sheer beauty. The releasing of the dragonfly without any harm was the perfect end to this childhood tale. May butterflies adorn your next commune with nature

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2018

'May butterflies adorn your next commune with nature' - so wonderfully said and wished, dear friend Kelly! I think most poets have a fascination for nature and birds. I am glad to know you liked my poem. Thanks for the appreciation!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2014

@Electric Lady Thank you so much for reading my old poem and leaving a kind appreciation. I am truly inspired.

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Carol Fleming Klein 24 January 2014

I enjoy your efforts to capture in imagery and detail, the mystery of a dragonfly. They have intrigued me since the day some 5 or more years ago, when I was on a field trip with my 4th grade students to a Native American Day at a local university, and an elderly Native American man played a flutelike instrument- -a song to speak to or call the dragonfly. The next day I was at a seminar where a large dragonfly entered the room and kept circling....Do they indeed bite?

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2013

@Sj Holland, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your kind words here.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2013

@ Beauteous Victory, I cannot thank you enough for the generous praise you shower on me.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 December 2013

@ Lasoaphia Quxazs, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. I am inspired. At that time, honestly, I didn't learn anything. But now, on hindsight, I think I can say that the lesson learned could be: 'Do not disturb nature, everybody has a right to live and to a living of its choice.' Or... 'Everybody has a reflexive mechanism of self defense.'

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Khairul Ahsan 24 December 2013

@Connie Yost, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your wonderful comment there. I am truly inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 December 2013

@ Marie Shine Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments. Glad to know you enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for the words of praise.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 December 2013

@Hazel Evelyn Durham, Thanks a lot for your thoughtful comment on my poem. Your observation is indeed insightful.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 December 2013

@Kay Vitter Thanks a lot for leaving your generous thoughts on my poem. I am highly inspired. Very glad to connect with you.

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Kay Vitter 23 December 2013

Poems can be like reading the best parts of someones journal. Cool account written here. And a better nature poem than most.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 December 2013

@soulful heart, Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. I am inspired by your thoughtful comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 December 2013

@Beauteous Victory, Hope you have put your difficult time behind you by now. Please read my poem again and say a few words about it.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@Valsa George, Thanks for leaving your elaborate comments on my poem. I feel good to know that my poem 'invoked a lot of childhood memories' in you.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@Mary Forrester, Glad to know you liked my poem. Thanks for the kind remark.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@ Susy Evelyne Thanks for your comments on my poem. I am so glad that you liked it. I also felt happy to write the words 'the multifaceted eyes and the tattoo rings'.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

@ Gary H Thank you very much for your comments on my poem. Your words are nice compliments.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 December 2013

@ Naida Nepascua Supnet, Thank you so much for reading my poem and your generous words. I am deeply inspired by your appreciation.

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Gary H 17 December 2013

Sweet, good stuff thats for true.

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