Wednesday, January 11, 2006

A Dove.... Comments

Rating: 4.8

From heaven came a dove
It brought a message of love

To let pervade the friendship
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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 September 2008

Hareem! Your poem expresses the wish of all third world countries....all sane countries...wonderful poem. my heartfelt congrats....10

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 August 2008

thanks hareem will read more of your work soon. keep on.

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To rule the world through lever of petrol! The content has not submitted itself to the slavery of rhyme. It so often happens that constraint to rhyme leads to content -cannibalism.

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Charles Chaim Wax 11 January 2006

a beautiful poem of hope of how the world should exist and if enough people read this fine poem there might be a chance good work

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Hareem Z K

Hareem Z K

Karachi, Pakistan
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