Wednesday, May 27, 2009

A Double Being Comments

Rating: 5.0

She rests on her knees
And the wind flows around her
Tendrils of silky hair
Run through her pale fingers
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Claire Hunter
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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

Although I'm pretty anti-Twllight (the part about the tranformation just reminds me) this poem captures a unique image, all in all a great poem 9/10

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Ena Wojcik 16 August 2009

I love the way the poem unfolds, you captured the life of a wolf and a human at the same time. Great work!

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