A Double Bed Comments

A nice piece of prose and a delightful thought. Irene

wow, great contrasts, great imagery. 'Slipping in between warmth and smooth embraces Sowing seeds of dreams Dirtying the sheets' This poem is wonderfully observant of human nature. It reminds us how love is much neater, more perfect when it is still in our imaginations: romantic; and the more real it becomes, messier for sure, but more human, and deeper.

very dreamy and beautiful

A double bed..............two bodies and single soul.............Good Write............

yeh a beutiful compostion indeed. Every night sleeping on my queen size bed but never given a serious thought just taken it for granted. -10 anjali

Brilliant comparison

I find this very homey somehow. Double beds were meant for two at their most vulnerable best.

We have alot of fun along the way though yes? This is soft by nature and all so true All the best Love duncan X