A Dot On Living Dreams Comments

wow! ! yes i wish i was there.........great write

it's really cool the way u see the world.. nice poem with magnificent imaginary... =)

A moving composition with wonderful metaphors,10 for it.

you have the ability to take people to the most beautiful places of the world with your words. breathtaking imagery my friend.

Wonderful imagery to complement the emotions!

I just could smell, taste, and feel your poem with all my senses my dear... too well penned, I like the way you contact your feelings and express it with all the colours and flavors... for real I could feel it! Thanks for sharing!