Friday, July 13, 2007

A Door You Close Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

are you a door you close forever,
or should I leave you wide open...
for possibilities to come as time ticks on?
if I don't hear you leave, are you really gone?
...
Read full text

Jade Leven
COMMENTS
Lee Degnan 23 July 2007

Hey Jade... haven't checked up on you in a while, thought I'd stop in and see how you're doing... and by the look of things, you're still the talented poetess I met before! This is an awesome poem, I love how you crafted this, keep up the great work! Lee

0 0 Reply
Jamie Simmons 21 July 2007

I like the pychological aspect of this poem, good job!

0 0 Reply
Jade Leven

Jade Leven

California
Close
Error Success