Wednesday, February 25, 2009

A Door Is Crying Comments

Rating: 4.8

The sadness rang my door
My tear opened the door
From me stole my lovers
I still have no lovers
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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 October 2015

Felt...really feltEvery time I tried to forget you My heart screamed I cant A travel is written we cant to don’t travel it I feel every word...I emotion within your poem...touched me..deep within...sharing is a good thing...thanks

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Afzal Shauq 29 June 2009

She is a forgetting treat Every time I tried to forget you My heart screamed I cant A travel is written we cant to don’t travel it heart touching romantic idea and short dtory type...lovely written and the way you write is good..impressive...composition of words is also rich..welll done.10++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

love is a funny ball game...it beats you often at the post... nice expressive write, Laila...10

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 10 April 2009

there is something that musnt be forgetten: after every darkness the day will shine around us.and sleeping sun will get up and rose smile with sleepy eyes

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