Wednesday, June 1, 2016

A Donkey's Song (A Poem For Children) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I did have a neck
As long as a giraffe's
I would have teased all other creatures
As puny little dwarfs.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Well written and dedicated towards the children.

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Mihaela Pirjol 02 June 2016

This is a very well-composed poem for children, with great rhythm and rhyme; and the last line is perfect for closure. I very much enjoyed reading it.

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