A Dolly Bird (A Love Poem) Comments
Daffodils, clear rills with musk-rose fills!
Tweet-tweet, It's a feast in eyes of the green universe;
With Her photographic smile, her youth blooms!
With genuine style, her bosom blossoms,
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A lovely poem that expresses in beautiful detail the wonderful attributes of a beautiful lady. Each line is lovingly penned depicting your love for your dolly bird. A reader feels the joy of the Poet in delivering this marvelous poem. Beautifully crafted and so melliflous when read. The recurring lines made this write more interesting and fascinating.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing and melodious poem. Enjoyed every beat in it. Rated 10+.
A gorgeous romantic poem dear poet! Amazing expression....enjoyed each line. Liked your last four lines most, " She's got the class and she's got the style! /With personality at top, a heaven's charm/With the kind soul, She's got a catchy heart! /Gordon Bennett! A dolly bird is the seventh wonder of my heart! Full marks!
A funny, quirky poem. The penultimate lines of each stanza have anarchic cliches. Other than that, I really loved this poem. Excellent word choice and phonetics. Good rythm, sing-songy like the bird it describes. A dolly bird is the seventh wonder of my heart, what a beautiful, personal sentiment.
Wonderful way of conveying your love for your love bird! I liked the style of writing and enjoyed reading it!
beauti in her witfull talk...i like this poem...really good...the tone of the poem something new...
This is so beautiful. I'm glad I'm reading it a second time, because now I really see the beauty of your words! Please write more poems like this one...
Beautiful! Every single line is exquisite! truly a beauty you have conjured up here!
I really, really loved this! I loose myself in your expressions...
I'm old enough to remember dolly birds. A very memorable time in my life. Thanks Try '1957' if you have a spare miute.
Very Beautiful, The jumping rhyme and lines so playful and interesting :) i can feel the cheerful of your mind, it's beautiful calm and serene when you wrote this...Nature always inspiring people..The green will green and nature will continuously inspiring and make mind remedy..another nice work :) _Unwritten Soul
'Daffodils, clear rills with musk-rose fills! Tweet, Tweet! It's a feast to the eyes of green universe, Her photographic smile, her youthful blooms! With genuine style, her bosom blossoms, ' It a beautiful poem with mesmerizing charm in it. Hey Jack! You have raised up your game by a notch. Splendid work by you buddy. I am proud to be your friend. I hope soon the doors of heaven will be opened for you so that you can be one among the top poets. I gotta grade the poem I give it 10+++
A lyric poem and an amazing one, , Excellent poetic depoction..10+++ I feel this poem as a classical poem; ; , I like the wonderful imageries also, , , , A great poem from a noble poet, ,
A lyric poem and an amazing one, , Excellent poetic depoction..10+++ I feel this poem as a classical poem; ; , I like the wonderful imageries also, , , , A great poem from a noble poet, ,
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The beauty of a poem - romantic! The beauty of the music - sardonic, The beauty of light rays, The beauty of life says, ............/// wonderfully expressed; natural bountifulness spreads its beauty out to inside; all adoptable parts of nature can enjoy it easily; cause and effect philosophy is expressed here brilliantly; well penned
I'm grateful to Mahtab Bangalee for his expressive comment on the poem 🙏🙏 💐💐