Wednesday, October 18, 2017

A Doll's Lament. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Pop. Pop. Pop. Pop. Pop
There goes her childhood along with her innocence
ripped away by their filthy hands
they feel so short lived much like the bubbles she used to play with
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Nika Mcguin 21 November 2017

By the way, not that it is much related, I also wrote about a doll that had been cursed by father time. I would say child abuse/molestation victims are much like that doll, since it's very hard to move past a traumatic event like that, they are sort of frozen in trauma.

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Nika Mcguin 21 November 2017

You've captured here the devastating reality of so many child abuse/molestation victims. All the emotions of guilt anger and sadness - moreover you've captured how this event happening at such a young age virtually destroys the victim's soul. Common sense, self-esteem, and the ability to be one's normal happy self are all out of the window.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, S.R. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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