A Dog Takes A Walk Comments

You discribe the trio very very well and the story has meaning you will make it don't lose your own style uavaluvliday regards

The creativity of this piece gets it a 9. It also means I'm moving on to the next poet, because this one has real talent. GW62

I love this poem. At 15 years of age I encourage you to continue writing. You have created a picture with your writing here and that is what the reader needs to be able relate to..........you write the words and the reader builds the picture you have created....very well done.

dear, dear, dear jess, amazing how you get that feeling about a boy you just met with mud on his face. i like the old man the best i think. so original. LOL Brookie

You are a very good writer.