Wednesday, July 2, 2014

A Dog Finds Peanut Comments

Rating: 3.5

There's a little girl I protect,
By doing my best to detect,
Peanuts by their smell,
As they make her throat swell,
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Stephen Katona
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 16 July 2014

very nice poem, metaphors are well composed.... lyrical and nicely composed... and meaningful...

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