Tuesday, August 28, 2012

A Dog, A Cat Comments

Rating: 4.1

A dog, a cat, a bird, a bat,
They all lived in a sailors hat;
One day he said 'I'll throw you out, '
He did, they fell
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John Carter Brown
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Shania K. Younce 17 April 2014

It is fine poem. I like the flow. Bien!

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Yash Shinde 12 April 2014

...a cute humorous rhyme, children would love it

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Lydia Martin 01 October 2013

Would you mind if I used your poem as the lyrics for a children's song?

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 22 November 2012

cute, fantastic, amazing and perfect. my God! I'm speechless! So funny! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a pure art!

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Adeline Foster 27 October 2012

Getting cuter all the time. Adeline

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Neil Mcgreevy 07 September 2012

I like this poem, it has humour and rhythm.

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