A do-before-danger fish,
Wasn’t willing to perish,
So, swimming up the river
It lived in safe deep water.
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a very very interesting piece to which I related to my life in the way live for now and enjoy for it could end quickly as in your poem, , , blessings..Cecil
What a wonderful way of letting language play with nature. This is very clever and original. S x
the figurative way he writes make me in fervour.....really he is a great in that sense now see again The lazy one is the next, Coming in the above list. As a thief of precious time, He had lost his life prime. he makes me to realize many beatitudes
I knew this poem would be a true original just by reading the title.What a wonderful parable, Rajaram! This poem teaches truth in a most enchanting way. I like it very much. Warm regards, Sandra
A great poem with such a nice message!