Thou with fiery brilliant charm
Will One day softly pass in calm
Like the embers burn and blow
Leaving ash and lose the glow
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A nice spiritual poem Saeed well written with some nice poetic lines. Worthy of a nine out of ten!
Wow Saeed. You are truly something. Something fantastic this piece is. I really loved this poem. the metaphors similes and every figure of speech is used masterfully. milk white shroud) (dust made body into dust) (Like the embers burn and blow) and many more. They carry grand message. Fantastic
Ah so poetically factual, wow! A superb poem. Yeah we wud return n merge with dust whether beautiful eh. So true n i admire d shinin remarkable lines n vote for it.
brilliant what must be said just brilliant..................
super yar......read it but will comments later, , , , dear Jan seems that u r under divine care nowadays
Love is divine and it shines forever. You've expressed it nicely.