Saturday, October 31, 2009

A Divine Silhouette Comments

Rating: 4.5

A seven petaled daffodil
Is ripened by the sun
And taught to dance on golden hills
Beside a river’s tongue
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Jean Dament 31 October 2009

I enjoyed this lovely poem with it's great imagery. Keep on writing; as you are doing well. 'pedaled'-should be 'petaled' ok Ravensong

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