Sunday, June 5, 2016

A Divine Honey Moon Comments

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A divine honeymoon that starts with a crescent,
and ends with the next crescent
with childish disputes like that
when we see children playing on streets,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

I thank God, the change of life style, is lovely, amazing and nice! Sublime expression......an excellent composition sir....10

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A creative and compelling composition!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

I think this book will continue! Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 June 2016

Childish disputes are common in relationships. Trying to balance adventure is too common that many adopt in lifestyle. Change of lifestyle becomes lovely always. This is very interesting poem shared on. Reciting the holy book only we get nice direction in life. Along with this wishing you very happy RAMADAN. May Allah bring lots of happiness for you and family in this holy month. Nice sharing...10

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