Wednesday, July 1, 2015

A Ditty Of Life Comments

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I sat to write a cheerful lyric
And then tried to spun out of it a song,
But the tune and rhythm somehow didn’t click
Something somewhere had gone wrong.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Kavya . 07 July 2015

dats great and it has also transformed into a beautiful poem. Well written Sir

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Good writing is a blessing from above; it comes spontaneously. The sense of agency is a peril for good writers. You have articulated this truth well in your poem. Enjoyed it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 July 2015

Truly, seriousness weakness downfall loss pain gradually move towards a gain.Loved reading the poem.Thanks for sharing

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