Wednesday, September 11, 2013

A Distraction Comments

Rating: 4.0

Distraction may or may not
Lead to obsession
But can lead one to commit any thing
As if one got obsessed with.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2014

The man must be mentally sick, a normal man can't do it. an thought provoking poem.

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Vijay Sai R 20 June 2014

your poem portrays evil effects of being distracted...

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 May 2014

A thoughtful, deeply moving and powerful poem...

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 March 2014

Distraction is some sort of interruption........Geetha...........which may lead someone to be positive or negative depending on how it is taken......and if obsessed with may lead to infatuation.....which again is a relative term.... So it all depends on person behaving positively or negatively..........well composed on a good stuff........

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 September 2013

u bring out a vivid picture of what would happen.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 September 2013

excellent work of Jaya versatility is the core of her attitude thank you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 September 2013

Obsession with the hair has been there for long. There is a famous poem about hair, titled 'The Rape of the Lock' by Alexander Pope (Popular Poet#61) published in 1712 which is available on PH. Nice poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 11 September 2013

an excellent narrative/ obsession can do anything! ! !

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 11 September 2013

A fine narration of fancy on infatuation.,

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Noreen Carden 11 September 2013

Hi Geetha very good i suppose we can all be a bit obsessive at times Well done

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Shraddha The Poetess 11 September 2013

hats off.....this one is the best i can say.............

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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