A Distorted Mirror Comments

Am I just beginning To see beyond ignorance, very deep, , , , , i can see the words.....10

nice... seems like a story of my life..

Wow thank you for bringing this up for me. It is mind bending self awakening. Poem brings the reader to the character. I like the rhythm also. Thank You for visiting and reading my poem too.

This one is great. A sense of humor and questioning what is real and what is not. Are you here or not? Is this real or not> these are the images that this poem brought up for me. I like this one a lot. Very nicely written and very thought provoking

Hmmm, 'A proof of omnipresence... (Or lack o common sense) ... ' a vicious accusation and at the same time a compelling plea to create questions far more powerful than sacred. Pure poetry, excellent work!

nicely written, gets the brain going, well done: 0)

Challenging. it makes me think. only the intelligent people feel the same, but still, is it not from a lack of common sense? I guess i interperet it in my own way.

Challenging. it makes me think. only the intelligent people feel the same, but still, is it not from a lack of common sense? I guess i interperet it in my own way.

Wow. Really great poem. i can relate