Our poem is a distillation
wrung from common and raw elements
unhusked grains of experience
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This is a 'very well distillated' mellow poem, like a good wine :) 'wrung from common and raw elements unhusked grains of experience'. Very well composed. I am neither an enologue or a professional poet, but i am a passionate reader :) .
And does the distillation tell us a thing or two about ourselves, reflected in the light of the gem, that help us defy time and maybe, just maybe what fate has in store! You have an exceptional ability to pick out and celebrate a slice of life that many of us take as 'normal' Cheers Anita
I loved the pace and rhythm of this piece. Your care in composing this verse shows. Peace, L&T
Hi Frank, I find your poetry very intense and strong. You write with great emotion and you a very interesting writer. Take care. Again an excellent poem.
Interesting. We seem to be turning the same poetic ground. See my poem: Back To The Land Movement. Val Morehouse
A very well written piece Frank, well distillated, made me fancy a whisky lol, but I understand what you were aiming for and it works,10 Lynda xx