Saturday, September 8, 2007

A Disfortunate Case Comments

Rating: 2.8

I suppose I should be thankful,
that you're not ' oozing ' on my floor,
- - - you're SO full of it,
that I doubt that even you,
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Barry Van Allen
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Diane Violet 11 September 2007

Once again I find myself repeating what's already been said by those who have commented before me. A disturbing and I imagine a bit difficult poem to write. It's not buyer beware but more buyer be aware...a good salesperson will state the pro's and con's...it's about service (helping) not salesmanship (Imo) .....All the best, Diane

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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2007

Judging by the fact that you said the intended reader was your friend, this must have been a bit difficult for you to write. Honesty is the best policy. I tend to not have a lot of time for salespeople (either professional or not) . Perhaps it's because I usually (admittedly...not always) see through all the glitz and glamour (ok...B.S! !) to the truth of what is really being sold...or the motivation behind it. Hugs, Dee

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Cynthia Yildirim 08 September 2007

disturbing and slightly deep, good poem

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