Sunday, May 2, 2010

A Disease=the Cure Comments

Rating: 5.0

as I roam the earth
normal looking and unscathed
I fear I am rotting on the inside
from some lethal disease
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Brute da Poet
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Adeline Foster 29 September 2011

With a chuckle I say, 'Dare I open one more? ' Adeline

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Romeo Della Valle 20 September 2011

Wow! What powerful and positive write that clearly shows your great bravery in facing your reality at the moment! Amazing words and imagery used in this touching masterpiece! Now, my dear friend, two words remain to be kept separately in your reservoir of poignant words: Faith and Hope! Everything will be alright and Time will validate my statement! 10+++ Well deserved for this masterpiece! Keep inspiring the World with More! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York!

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Tami Alshamsi 21 April 2011

nice poem and wish I find the cure to my disease ((read my poem (dead)))

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