' A Discourse On Pleasure ' Comments

A witty bit of a verse, well articuated and nicely penned with strong emotions.

A brilliant write! Appreciated and admired......10

A bit difficult to understand but nicely written!

An intresting piece. Thanks for sharing

we wake up rise from our positions of defeat & we proclaim incessantly through a murmur: 'forget it, it is not me! '.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Sometimes we love to like other shoe but the problem it didn't.. :)

Sweet words. Good poet

I look around and see, all is joyful, all is glee. Wonderful wordplay

This is very well written.