A Disc Of Shining Light Comments

I am not religious, though I think myself spiritual, but this poem took me through an array of powerful emotions. She went through so much sadness and despair, to something truly beautiful in hope. Wonderful. Thank you.

Hi Daniel, A wonderfully imaginative verse with my emotions being carried like a chariot flying through outer space. I love the combination of spritual and astronomical themes and the ease you have bringing it all into a very homogenous poetic form. My new piece Interplanetary Insanity is a science fiction type of dreamworld. I think you may enjoy it. Greetings, Paul

Despite being a Christian, I haven't heard of Valadriel! You have given a tangible entity to a sprite that can be conceived only in imagination. How amid all splendor, the angel felt restless as she had concern for the suffering humanity below. So she longed to quit the celestial fields and descend down. Her journey down to Earth through ether, through galaxies, through space and time is beautifully and methodically presented as if the sequential shots in the celluloid. Finally her descending down and settling on the natural realm, her living with humans, sharing their joys and sorrows remind one of Jesus Christ who came down in human flesh for the salvation of mankind and spreading the message of love and peace! An amazing write!

Light shines and fills mind with beautiful glitter. This poem is very fantastically composed with broad vision. Amazing sharing...10