Monday, December 17, 2018

A Dirge (Villanelle) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart keeps drinking shadows of the moon;
I've drowned before in darkness when it's bright;
My eyes keep spinning silence with a spoon
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Sonya Annita Song
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 30 December 2018

Superb write and profound theme woven into a villanelle. Loved the flow and the vivid imagery.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2018

Dear Sonya, a well penned lovely villanelle...10++++

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