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Everything is dependant on pragmatic approach and its revival.......sun is so powerful.............10

The sun was its new height with direct rays People were running for shed in hot days.. awsome experience...10

User Rating: 10.0 /10 (2 votes) Print friendly version E-mail this poem to e friend Send this poem as eCard Add this poem to MyPoemList The sun was its new height with direct rays People were running for shed in hot days It was really unbearable to withstand the natural fury It was making everybody tired and weary ..... nature is displeased.....10/10

A very impressive write on some of the man-made problems and their consequences that we face today and those that will continue to torment us in future, too. The last stanza is the best: We may still survive and last long The path chosen by us is very wrong Nature and mankind must live side by side The gulf should not be created wide and wide

It's a poem that tells a message that really needs to be told and you told it so well.

A timely advice to the people who are the cause for this pollution around the world.

I was just thinking of writing a poem on global warming, Hasmukh overtook me.I was cut off from the site for quite some time and am astonished to find you have crossed 700 poems.HEARTIEST CONGRATS.My knowledge was upto your crossing 300, this is really commendable. The poem is very contemporary under the scorching heat prevailing for quite some time.It is well thought out.Your rhyming is always excellent.The poem reflects your enlightenment of the pertinent information and has beautifully portrayed the world bereft of soft, wet touch of the nature.I give secret voting, but of late voting no.is always slipping away.So your open vote is ten out of ten, a well deserved score.