Sunday, September 2, 2012

A Dip Into The King's Purse (A Story With A Dory In It) Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sky was black as a hangman's heart
cold mist hung like a shroud
rain lashed down on the windswept cove
from the dark and stormy clouds
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Neil McGreevy
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Adam Hoagland 02 September 2012

This reminds me of Kipling. Kipling being one of my favorites, consider that a compliment. Good ballad, interesting story, nice twist, nice use of rhyme and meter. Well done!

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