Wednesday, September 20, 2017

A Dip In The Pool Comments

Rating: 3.5

A dip in the pool is surely delightful
Luxuries dim in comparison to
Time spent in conversation
The water is cool but
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 20 September 2017

As I sit by the pool, I imagine he is here with me, palms on mine. In reality, he's far off, somewhere where surfing is fine for beginners. He's just beginning to live at 25 having had a stint with outsourcing from age 14. I can live with the knowledge that he's healing. I'm fine here with the impression of his soft hands.: -)

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Todd Giberson 20 September 2017

Love this, Doris. I love the focal point Hands / Soft / In / Mine

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Doris Cornago 20 September 2017

Hi Todd. You also have the painter quality of a poet. Paint more. Thank you for visiting.

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Doris Cornago 20 September 2017

This is the discordance of young and old, fast and slow. When two people are contrapuntal, there's bound to be a rift until someone decides to slow down and adjust. Long distance relationships do not last long - or do they?

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