Tuesday, August 4, 2009

A Different Tune Comments

Rating: 3.0

In the silence of the night
when whispers do not stir
you can see their shadows
slip quietly across the wall.
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Guy Lip-more 21 April 2013

Excellent poem, reminded me of when I was a kid.

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Alison Cassidy 02 January 2010

This is delightful David. It flows with poetic authority and captures the ephemeral nature of the subject with great skill. You are definitely in good poetic form at the moment. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Bob Blackwell 06 August 2009

David, this is quite beautiful to read, shadows in the night. Top marks Bob

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 04 August 2009

Were they real or imaginary? Best we not judge and let them be to come back and dance another day to a different tune. A beautiful poem filled with mystery like our life. Real or imaginary, only a dream, an hallucination perceived upon the fingertips of five senses.10.

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David Harris

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