Thursday, August 30, 2018
A Different Tomorrow Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I fall into this deep sorrow
looking for a different tomorrow
not a dandelion to wish upon
I long for a different song
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Bernard F. Asuncion
31 August 2018
Such a marvelous write...............10+++++++++++++++++++
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Aqua Flower
31 August 2018
Thank you for reading this write and for all those plus signs too! Glad you liked reading it! Have a wonderful day!
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7/22/2025 11:03:19 PM # 1.0.0
The line, 'not a dandelion to wish upon', is a creative way to express having nothing to wish upon to rid the loneliness. A 10.
That is exactly the sentiments I wanted to express thank you for fully understanding the poem.