Sunday, December 14, 2008

A Different Path Comments

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Who, in his dreams or musings would have thought
a path, though narrow, through the jungle weaved,
a voice inside kept singing, yes, we ought
set foot among the shrubs where gods are peeved
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Fay Slimm 07 January 2009

Hmmm a suble but beautiful love poem.... hope I see correctly between these well written lines...... have read through a few times - - - so perhaps I have convinced myself....... but a very good read and thanks...... with the best of good wishes from Fay. in Cornwall U.K.

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