Wednesday, September 2, 2015

A Different Girl Comments

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I see a change in her,
Yes, I still look at her.
She has closed her doors,
I have closed my doors.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 15 September 2015

You have beautifully brought out the change that has come over the girl, not only in her physical appearance but also in her attitude to life and living! But I must say...... peeping is a bad habit Akhtar ji! You'll be penalized.....Ha.. Ha! !

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Hazel Durham 14 September 2015

Wow! I love this superb write, as you see the changes in this girl growing up with her softer side glowing, possibly it's her experience of her first love that enchants her world and inspires her passion and desires into such beauty let free from her pen!

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Khalid Saifullah 03 September 2015

A different poem on a different girl......................................10

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Bisma Mirza 03 September 2015

nice one... i like it! ! ! 10 on 10..

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