A Different Challenge Comments

An excellent poem sir! Thanks for sharing

Complexly grows to a fine point.

honestly this reminds me of myself

nice! ! i likes the rhyming^-^

I actually, like this poem, the last couple of stanzas were very connective to many things in our lives, I love the exemplary vocabulary used, it creates a mass amount of imagery, imagery which is quite nice to picture.

I liked the way you built on the notes played from line to line. Not all storytellers are poets but all poets are storytellers. A very fine job telling this one.

positive vibes nicely articulated... enjoyed! !

Don’t cry for somebody’s action and fault It might have been insult and somersault You got to forget and brace for new lease of life You may prove very good mother and honored wife yes....at some point of time...we need to put our past behind us and stop blaming ourselves...that will liberate us in the real sense....