(dedicated to Mr. Eddie Roa, a great poet at poemhunter)
come out of shadows of blackened dreams
my soul soars like a Spring valley's glow
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Very well written and beautiful imagery. You are very good at presenting your poetic voice. thanks for sharing Michael
I love the first verse its delightful nice work Krista
Dear friend Ahmad, I have mixed emotions for this. I do not deserve an adulation such as a poem dedicated to me. It is an embarassment for there are those in PoemHunter more deserving. Pardon my being a bit dense today but I'm still grappling with end part of the poem. Thanks and I will strive to be more worthy. Eddie
So touching and beautiful. Your words and imagination are so much better than mine. Keep it up! ! MIMI
its so nice to see you dedicating poems to your friends on poem hunter.
on behalf of our friend's devotion is lost in the light of their rays? no, never surrender your love we know how to survive --------fantastic lines here...written with great strength and positive outlook in life...10
What a blessing this love is for the world may it open many hearts Thanksgreetings from Sneek Boomfriend Ruerd
Good poem Ahmad - - and your last line stays in the mind - - you certainly know how to survive - - with love in your heart to many - - - well written 10 + + + from Fay.
Very well written and beautifully done. thanks for sharing Michael