Friday, February 13, 2009

A Diary Seven (La Isla Bamba) Comments

Rating: 2.7

(dedicated to Mr. Eddie Roa, a great poet at poemhunter)

come out of shadows of blackened dreams
my soul soars like a Spring valley's glow
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Michael Brock 12 May 2010

Very well written and beautifully done. thanks for sharing Michael

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Michael Brock 12 May 2010

Very well written and beautiful imagery. You are very good at presenting your poetic voice. thanks for sharing Michael

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I love the first verse its delightful nice work Krista

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Eddie Roa 22 February 2009

Dear friend Ahmad, I have mixed emotions for this. I do not deserve an adulation such as a poem dedicated to me. It is an embarassment for there are those in PoemHunter more deserving. Pardon my being a bit dense today but I'm still grappling with end part of the poem. Thanks and I will strive to be more worthy. Eddie

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Mimi Fakhira 20 February 2009

So touching and beautiful. Your words and imagination are so much better than mine. Keep it up! ! MIMI

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Chitra - 19 February 2009

Beautiful and touching poem

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

its so nice to see you dedicating poems to your friends on poem hunter.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 February 2009

Survive is a real keyword today.

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Catrina Heart 14 February 2009

on behalf of our friend's devotion is lost in the light of their rays? no, never surrender your love we know how to survive --------fantastic lines here...written with great strength and positive outlook in life...10

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Ruerd Visser 14 February 2009

What a blessing this love is for the world may it open many hearts Thanksgreetings from Sneek Boomfriend Ruerd

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rago rago 14 February 2009

Love never get ice cold. Never dies. Please rework.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 14 February 2009

love never grows old or dies ahmad

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Fay Slimm 13 February 2009

Good poem Ahmad - - and your last line stays in the mind - - you certainly know how to survive - - with love in your heart to many - - - well written 10 + + + from Fay.

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nice tribute to a great man

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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