A Diary One (La Isla Bossa Nova) Comments

Although this reads more like prose than poetry, it is a wonderful dedication to friendship. Irene

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

Ah! Nice to have good friends. We can have all kinds of friends and at different levels. This one sounds like a friendship with deep ties. Continue on.

'take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world ' - yes, it is a wonder. Peculiarly I like him. Beautiful poem, marvellous writing. Thank you. Greetings for you :)) Maria Barbara Korynt

Nice poem. keep it up.

More fabulous dedication to PH poet friends...great craft came from the heart...10

A very moving work,10+

A very moving work,10+

take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world these three lines say it all ahmad

YAYY! ! Fay.. thank you for this one my friend.

Beautiful words expressed your deep meaning... Excellent work! Thanks for sharing.. Mimi

A very moving work, my friend. Thank you. Richard

Ahmad, it is always a treat, a pleasure to read anything you write and share with us. Your tribute, your thanks to Fay Slimm is very much appreciated. Loved the glimpse into an actual exploration of an on-line developing/developed friendship. I loved the expressed pleasure but benefitted from your mature consideration of keeping the friendship within realistic and beneficial boundaries. Yes, as you delicately described, we, people, can be friends. The shared gift of creativity is the bonding material. Beautiful and natural. Carol

That poem is good.

a nice tribute to a friend.

very personal comments my friend

nice dedicated friendship sharing, may at least 50% think like that the world would be wonderful thank you.10+

a nice friendship poem it is. i like it dear. have 10

Great! Thank the 'poemhunter'!

A great poem of feelings extended from one artist to another.