A Diary Four (La Isla Samba) Comments

Your use of words is well done, very good flow and imagery, I like feel of this poem. It gives me a remembered feeling of young love... thanks for sharing Michael

a lovely and wonderful poem.nice wording surya

What a friendly dream...dream of a poem10

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

A nice place by the sea to visualize and contemplate. Helps beautify your thoughts of love. All the s words in the first stanze help create the right mood. Good writing.

Your remaining love is splendid. This love is nothing imperturbable and bright. Very much I like this subtlety in your poems. I am greeting :)

Another excellent dedication of a beautiful poem...thanks...10++

Nice poem for a nice person, 10 Lynda xx

Well written truibute for a lovely lady.

nice poem for a good friend

great tribute verses for Catrina Heart..lovely..

Oh! thank you so much for this heartfelt poem, overwhelming emotions fills me while reading through this lovely dedication. I loved the words seaguls and swan you used here in this vivid composition for they represent beauty and advancement to everything............ The island of Samba, wherein dance and music in Brazil goes perfect in a 4/4 beat and rhythm....lively and enjoyable one... Ahmad, I am giving you my humble and deepest appreciation for dedicating this sweet and eloquent composition of yours.....10++++++++++

In this poem also, repect tends to be a kind of love at one point. You may not be menaing it so but the poems reflects. In my opinion, let us not nurture this kind of sentiments to our well wishers and critics. It is all part of the game.

May you contlinue to share the fruits of your love! Thanksgreetings from Sneek Boomfriend Ruerd

A good heart always posses smooth feelings for their friends good 10

Yes you have done here. Love frolics and bring heavenly joys.

your love has captured me your love holds me back swan flies up and soars the birds sing in flocks i love the above ahmad