Monday, February 23, 2009

A Diamond Comments

Rating: 4.7

There was set in life to be
A diamond born,
Twas his destiny.
Though once he starting growing,
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Butterflies In My Belly Forever
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Paul Cutting 10 September 2009

very beautiful, thank you

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Myrtle Thomas 10 April 2009

I found this a very sad poem, heart felt.But a very clear voice as we read and feel the pain in it. A great poem

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Carl Harris 23 February 2009

This is a touching and beautifully expressed poem, BIMBF, one that has a sad undertone to it. Like all of your fine poems, it has it's own uniqute style and plumbs the depths of emotions. There is both hope and sadness in this remarkable poem, especially in that wonderfully written final verse. Carl.

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