Wednesday, January 26, 2011

A Diamond In The Dust Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm not saying that it's easy for you,
I know you've been let down before,
you aren't sure you wanna start something new,
you're tired and don't wanna hurt anymore.
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Peter Strugnell
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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A nice poem with good rhyming pattern. Well as par finding diamond in the dust, Faith Keeps Those Who Keep The Faith - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Vipins Puthooran 20 January 2012

This's a fantastic poem, , , , , ,10*

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Ramesh Rai 20 January 2012

I know it's down to me to let you know your heart may still be undecided can't promise you a perfect tomorrow but i would never let you be misled i like it. xlent write

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Peter Strugnell 08 February 2011

many thanks Malaya Roses for the kind words, i did my best to be rythmical, and keep it true!

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Malaya Roses 07 February 2011

Persistence and determination shall make her loving you till the end. The poet was successfully built a poem with every stanza ended rhythmically and that's so beautiful to read. Keep love her and try to love her more. 10/10

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Peter Strugnell

Peter Strugnell

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