Saturday, June 19, 2010

A Dialogue Iii: A Man Is A Man Comments

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Woman: Mark, do you love me?

Man: Define ‘love'
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Yoni Assis
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Brandon Owens 21 June 2010

I've read many more of your poems(but not all) and I would have to say this is my favorite. Although your other poems are mostly well written with different rhythm many stick to an end rhyme scheme. This one is marvelous in the way it is so free. It's not simply a conversation, but a very cleverly written and humorous piece. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

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Yoni Assis 19 June 2010

Thanks, Sherri! ! Unfortunately, it is true, but not about every man. I'm the guy in the A Woman Is a Woman piece: / This is the first time I've come across you here...are there any particular pieces of yours you'd like me to read?

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Sherri Coulter 19 June 2010

very funny/witty/true! ! ! 10 for you! ! ! ! !

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