Sunday, January 17, 2010

A Dialogue Between An Army And Some Young People Comments

Rating: 5.0

(There was an army which was composed of grown-ups (both men and women) . It was an army that was skillful in using swords, spears, bows, and arrows; it was an army where all members knew how to use their armors. They had enough knowledge on how to have combat with an enemy; they fit physically.

Now, this army engaged in a battle wherein their skills and armors they found that those were not enough. They were shocked because this battle where they engaged in never happened before. They could not make a strike, their arrows are not enough and their shields cannot shield them any longer… all that they know and have is not enough to win.
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Obed dela Cruz
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safi ur rwehman 25 April 2019

this is totally like a drama

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Ken E Hall 23 May 2010

The message is clear and your thoughts for mankind is clear a nice tribute to yourself which you did not ask but I give...great work here regards

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Miriam Maia Padua 31 January 2010

great thoughts.. very substantial write... sending great, clever message... Maia

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Farah Aliah 30 January 2010

Being an army is difficult

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2010

O yes, let us be one and understand each other… let’s not limit each other…...this is need of an hour and quite extraordinary one.....10

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Leah Ayliffe 23 January 2010

Written with true emotion, sends a beutiful message excellent work!

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Vaishakseetharam Dattani 17 January 2010

U hav put a great effort, it would hve been more touching if it wasn't like a conv..God Bless

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I'm me 17 January 2010

this is more like a drama than a poem...

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Andrew Leamon 17 January 2010

Wow, this almost tastes of the ancient Greek stage.

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