A Dialogue Comments

Fantastic Akram, Very lovely imagery, and style.10

Dialogue is an integral part of the world. It goes on untill the union with the One. CP

Two different views, what they want and what they desire. very effectively depicted in this poem.

Rulers are rulers coz' people are scared and scattered.When they won't be scared for life, their children and anything, then it will be crusade.Rulers only rule until the end where and when a crusade and a renaissance starts.Rules are not forever.It is only love that rules.Anything else is shortlived or history of representations that is hated about a tyrannic ruler or as puerile as anything.Overall yiur representations for deadly and dreaded are good.

The game played by the ruler and the people was written in a very nice poetic structure...sarcasm in the end as a laughing phrase...nice! ! !

The gap between have and have not beautifully depicted in ur poem............Good Write...

I can relate to this work. Very astute in observation, yet without condoning violence. It is positive in it's message of a ruling class who sees the crumbs they offer as feed for the animals.

This was made with humour good work poet

A dialogue of realities, black and white realities indeed, very well worded.

great conversational atmosphere u got here..very expressive and articulate..greatly penned and well enjoyed!