Thursday, March 8, 2012

A Diadem Of Dust I Wear Comments

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A diadem of dust I wear
Till polished, to completion-
As goes to mote, the single stone
Through times rough depredation.
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Patti Masterman
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Georgios Venetopoulos 23 January 2013

Well written by an experienced poetess, the write offered me a smile of spiritual satisfaction; for our Patti is an excellent poet. I am the bear of the remainder, though! (woof!)

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Annabel Cruz 12 March 2012

Excellent rhyme scheme! Love the line the baleful weight of time, I'll bear/while love bear the remainder

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