Saturday, April 13, 2019

A Diabetic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Weak is my eyesight to watch
Feeble are my legs to walk
Deficient are my arms to hug
Shaky is my tongue to talk,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2019

Liked the tantalizing picture that goes with this wonderful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2019

A fascinating poem well crafted. Though a kiss is the sweetest of the sweet, it.will not affect a diabetic person instead it will bring happiness and therefore enhanced its.energy. Wonderfully conveyed and composed.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 April 2019

To diabatic as is sugar, to man of tired limbs, tired mind, a kiss, And, and from a young miss! ! !

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Aqua Flower 13 April 2019

This is a very interesting poem on the sweetness of a kiss. Luckily a kiss, even though it is packed with sweetness, will not negatively affect the diabetic condition. Sweet poem.

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