Thursday, June 20, 2019

A Dewdrop Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silently slipped
From the dark night
Hoping to see the bright light
From the familiar zone
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

My plea was unheard! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 July 2019

To be able to empathise with the dew-drop, and go along with it through all its obstacles, it is the very emblem of a refined poet!

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Valsa George 01 July 2019

The adventurous journey of a dew drop from heaven's heights to the Earth is beautifully described! The dew drop precariously balancing on the blade of a leaf got shaken by the wind and fell into the mud! Great imagination!

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

A lovely piece on the journey of a dewdrop. It begins well and ends beautifully... A blow of wind made to bite the dust And now I am part of it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2019

Silently slipped From the dark night Hoping to see the bright light From the familiar zone To the unknown High in spirits As I went by All seems to delight.....fantastic beginning. A beautiful poem on Dewdrop having touching expression is amazingly shared.10

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M. Asim Nehal

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