I looked upon her beauty as a flower
I hesitated to pinch her from her stem
Instead I planted myself next to her
Where I too have flourished in a sense…..
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Very cute. I get the picture of someone strolling through a meadow and being stopped by a lovely flower, not plucking it but instead sitting next to it in order to continue enjoying it.
Moving. I understood and related to this one quite well; I enjoyed its message. Your use of metaphor is flawless here.
i expected it to be longer haha lol..............i love it..........=]
This poem is short, And so beautiful. But they are no words no one could ever add to it. From the beginning to end Your love is so true to Her. Its a master piece of Her Love much respect I give you for that
That is very lovely. Short and sweet, altogether enjoyable. Stick to poems like this, the ones that have a message and a meaning.
this is a very beutiful poem that left no space for missed words or unsaid feelings.... its lll put togther in fopur lines.... realll beutiful poemmm..love it
Very rich in imagery and metaphor. Short poems are the hardest to write, but you managed to pack it in as few lines as possible. Well done James Papastamos
beautiful four verses, why pick a flower si it dies quicker, plant yourself next to that flower and grow together, excellent piece :)
A beautiful verse Ted and so tenderly written. Best wishes, Andrew
Ted, Wow, you truly have a gift. Thanks for sharing! Darlene
Mr Sheridan-excellent poem! ! I am truly in awe of your poetry, I really mean it, I've come to your pages more than once, sometimes I feel as though I'm reading a renowned poet who is taking his place alongside ee cummings etc. No kidding. You are an inspiration to me, and I hope to be writing the pieces you are writing when I am your age! Please check out my poems as well! Samuel Stuart Pennell
Oh this is so powerfull with so little words! ! This is a 10 for sure..... Very sweet and it hit my heart.. Bonnie
Short and sweet and it packs a whallop! ! ! And in the top 500 I can see why.
I think this was the best way to emote ur feelings in only 4 lines you toched the hearts.
A beautiful love poem Ted I love the idea of you planting yourself next to her.